FORESHADOW
  • Magazine
    • Contents
    • Podcast
  • About
    • Works

The Third Movement of Genesis

25/1/2021

2 Comments

 
By Emma McCoy

I have become a covenant, beautiful and new.
I will walk faithfully, like the blameless
and God said “I will make nations out of you.”

I looked at the stars, the ones I thought I knew
and whispered “I will no longer be aimless”
for I have become a covenant, beautiful and new.

I swallowed my fear in the lands I passed through
and whispered “I will not be left nameless”
and God said “I will make nations out of you.”

God gave me a son; it was something like a preview
of His love. Our laughter was shameless
because we have become a covenant, beautiful and new.

I held nothing back. In my obedience I brought my joy to
the LORD even when it would leave me claimless
and He said “I will make nations out of you.”

In my old age there are things I know are true:
My God is faithful and changeless;
I have become a covenant, beautiful and new
and God said “I will make nations out of you.”

Emma McCoy is a literature student at Point Loma Nazarene University, California. Much of her poetry explores biblical narratives through re-imagination, closed forms and a close look at the structures and imagery of the original stories. When she's not writing, she spends her time outdoors chasing the downhill -- either skiing or mountain-biking. 
2 Comments
Gamma
27/1/2021 08:46:53 pm

Picked up on the ........less lines. Enjoyed the flow and unconventional (to me) placement of the rhyming lines. Seemed to make me hover and think.

Reply
Josh S. link
27/1/2021 09:09:39 pm

Thanks for your comments, Gamma. This poem is a villanelle, a poetic form with a specific structure and rhyme pattern, which is probably what you were noticing about the -less lines.

See here for more info: https://poets.org/glossary/villanelle

Reply



Leave a Reply.

    Categories

    All
    Anaphora
    Art
    Editorial
    Fiction
    Forethought
    Interview
    Music
    Non-fiction
    Photography
    Poetry
    Review

    RSS Feed

    Archives

    November 2025
    October 2025
    September 2025
    July 2025
    June 2025
    February 2025
    November 2024
    October 2024
    September 2024
    August 2024
    July 2024
    June 2024
    May 2024
    April 2024
    March 2024
    February 2024
    January 2024
    December 2023
    November 2023
    October 2023
    September 2023
    August 2023
    July 2023
    June 2023
    May 2023
    April 2023
    March 2023
    February 2023
    January 2023
    December 2022
    November 2022
    October 2022
    September 2022
    August 2022
    July 2022
    June 2022
    May 2022
    April 2022
    March 2022
    February 2022
    January 2022
    December 2021
    November 2021
    October 2021
    September 2021
    August 2021
    July 2021
    June 2021
    May 2021
    April 2021
    March 2021
    February 2021
    January 2021
    December 2020

Magazine
Contents
Podcast
About
Works
Connect with Foreshadow
Support our work
© COPYRIGHT 2020–2025. ALL RIGHTS RESERVED.
  • Magazine
    • Contents
    • Podcast
  • About
    • Works